CHAPTER THREE CORE 3000

The weekend is here!!!! Hooray! I wrote this on Saturday I didn't post it till today. I hope you enjoy chapter three!! Again, this is not edited in any way shape or form. Enjoy!!

SECOND PART OF CHAPTER 2

Hello! Today was m going to post the second part of chapter two of Core 3000. It’s totally not edited and some of the sentences are completely weird. So don’t be flabbergasted if some of the sentences don’t make sense. 

  

Here it is!

~A few hours earlier~

Breeze hummed a song as she walked through the forest, the basket in her right hand was full of berries and the other hand had purple, plue, and pink flowers in it. The sky was a magnificent blue with a pink strip on the horizon. She breathed in the cents of her surroundings. As she rounded a bend a gust of wind swept her blond loose hair to the side. The wind pulled and pushed at her dress.  

“Well hello there! What do you need?” The wind settled and took shape, A girl about the same age as Breeze, who was sixteen, with a long white dress that faded into nothing and her hair was silver with white strands. Her skin was pale and had a warm tent to it, making a beautiful complexion. Her eyes were almost as if they were made out of shards of diamond. They didn't have a particular color, just diamond like. She smiled and nodded at Breeze.

“Breeze, there's someone who needs our help. One of your kind, you know, actually your kind.” The wind took Breeze's hand. Breeze smiled and thought about who it could be. My kind! I wonder why he or she needs our help… the wind melted into her normal form. Breeze fell limp as the wind swept her up. She giggled, she always had loved to ride the wind. Since she was a little girl she had had a special bond with it. No one she knew had such powers. She also had the ability to turn invisible and could shape shift. She had not quite mastered her abilities, and still needed a lot of practice. 

The terrain passed before her eyes. The snow capped mountains in the east and the coast in the west. Beyond the mountains Breeze knew there were rolling hills and flat valleys full of soft grass. And beyond the hills and valleys there was a great strong hold on a very large hill that overlooked the island on which Breeze lived. Then there was the ocean. And if you go far enough out the ocean will end. And there will be nothing but energy, waves and waves of energy. Then you will come upon another island, about the size of the one that she lived on. There were four islands that made up her planet. Three large and one very small. On the small one lived the royal family. And on the three larger ones is where the people of Core 3000 lived. 

The king sent out three sets of lords and ladies to oversee the three larger islands. Then every year they would report back to the king and queen, unless there was an emergency of course. Breeze smiled at the thought of the geography of her planet. She loved geography and was very smart when it came to that subject. Her eyes scanned the ground as the wind came nearer to it. Finally her feet touched solid ground and the wind took shape again. 

“Over here.” The wind motioned to a small patch of grass. As Breeze walked nearer, she saw that a boy, about her age, was lying there, his eyes were shut and his rist was black and blue. He looked like he had taken a few blows to the head and he was obviously not in a good state. She gasped and rushed over to him. I wonder what happened! He’s cute, other than that nasty bruise on his cheek bone. 

“What happened? Do you know?” Breeze looked up at the wind and then back down at the boy. 

“Actually I do,” the wind smiled her soft smile and continued, “I was minding my own business and I heard a cry. I thought I should check it out and I found them.” 

“Them? What do you mean by them?” Breeze cocked her eyebrows into a confused expression. 

“There were two. This boy and a girl. She was the one who bruised his wrist. She dragged him a very long way and then I decided to interfere. I think I scared her. She ran off into the woods the way she had come. I brought him here to this patch of grass. He started to come into consciencessness and he obviously was in pain so I put him down. I thought maybe you could help me help him.” 

“Oh...well what do you need me to-” Breeze stopped mid sentence and gasped softly when the boy rolled over and moaned.  She glanced at the wind and then looked back at the boy. His eyes were open but he looked foggy. 

“M-Maggie? Wha-what's going on?” His hand flew up to the bruise on his forehead and he scrunched up his face in agony. 

“No, no i'm not Maggie. Do you remember anything?” Breeze didn't want to pummel the young man with questions but she at least had to know if his head was alright. 

“Breeze.” The wind was tapping Breeze ever so softly on the shoulder. Breeze turned around and looked at the wind. “Breeze, I think we should get back to your house where he, and us, are safe… Look.”  The wind motioned to a patch of bushes. There was a small girl, but she looked to be about fourteen or fifteen despite her small size. She froze when she realized they had seen her. “Breeze, turn into a pegasus. Now.” There was a warning in the winds voice

“But why now?”

“Are you questioning me?”

“Well, no… Fine. Yes.”

“Just turn.” 

“Okay I’m turning!” Breeze imagined the pegasus and then in an instant, she was one. 

“Here,” The wind had changed into her normal form and she was holding the boy, who had slipped back into unconsciousness, In her windy grasp. She put the young man on top of Breezes back and then turned back into her being form. She jumped onto Breeze and yelled, “Go!” And they were off. The small girl down below was yelling and cursing and saying something about the Man-In-Black. Though Breeze was too far off before she could hear exactly what the girl was saying. 

“So, why did we have to leave so soon?” Breeze asked the wind. 

“That girl was the one who did this to Thrist.” The wind had a fearful tone in her voice. 

“Thrist?” The wind smiled and nodded, pointing at the boy. The rest of the trip Breeze and the wind did not talk. The wind was thinking of things concerning nature and things like that. But Breeze was thinking about the young, handsome man that she had just helped rescue. Or kidnap. But it seemed as if the boy was not friends with the people who had hurt him. And he was handsome! 

Breeze's thoughts went on and on like this for quite some time. Finally her little cottage came into view. It was on a beautiful hill with a little brook next to it and a pasture. Next to the pasture was a shack in which they kept a milking cow and the four horses and a small row boat. But Breeze has never gotten a good look at the boat because her aunt never let her. She said it belonged to her father, whom Breeze has never met, and that she must never look at it. After a few more minutes of flying, they finally landed in a small grove of trees.

“How are we going to get him inside?” Breeze wondered out loud. 

“You come up with that. But before I go, you need to know something. I have sent a bird to see were he lives. And it’s completely destroyed. Everyones dead. The house was rampaged after he left. And there’s one more important thing you need to know. The Man-In-Black is after him.

P.S

Happy first day of May!!!

Update on Core 3000

Hia!!

I hope that your day is going well!

I am doing a update of core 3000. I was thinking and I don't really like the name. Its definitely not the coolest name ever that's for sure!! So here is the update and I am also going to talk about possible name ideas.

Book Name 1: Scars of Truth
Book Name 2: Hunters of Darkness
Book Name 3: Core 3000
Book Name 4: I'm note sure... HELP ME COME UP WITH MORE NAMES!!!!

Other than the book name, a already am in love with the characters in my book! in chapter two you meat a sweet girl named Breeze you can talk to spirits. She and the wind spirit are specially connected. Breeze is going to become a BIG part of the story so i'm trying to develop he character a little more. The book is going to switch from POVs (point of views) But it will all be in third person. It will go between Breeze and Thrist. I have not finished the second chapter but I will post the first part under this.

Chapter II

 

           Thrist jolted awake. A burning  pain shot up his spine, and a dull ache throbbed in his wrist. He let out a moan that sounded more like a wail of pain. A thin layer of sweat beaded his forehead and body. What’s going on? The pain in his back ripped through his spine again and he winced. The pain took his breath away and he gasped for breath. He cried out again. Why is no one helping me? What is going on? I can’t open my eyes! Help! Someone please HELP!

Finally Thrist willed himself to open his eye. Blinking in the brightness, everything came back. Tears welled up in his eyes, he blinked them back. On Cor 3000 it was not appropriate for a seventeen year old boy to cry. Breathing heavily he sat up, grunting and wincing as he did so. He glanced around. He was really in a small room, almost like the one he had at home, he was in an old bed with a green and yellow quilt. There was a small window and a pitcher of water on a bedside table. Abruptly a plump woman with red cheeks wearing a brown dress and had an apron on, as if she had been cooking, opened the door. 

“Oh bother! Oh dear me! This isn’t good! Lad, lay back down! Oh my!” She tsked and rushed over to Thrists bed side. Insisting him to lay back down. He winced a few times but other than that he made no sound. “Dear me lad! What were you thinking? When did you wake up?... oh never mind! Don’t answer any of my silly questions. I'm just a little frazzled, that's all. Now to see how bad your injuries are...humph, no no that wouldn’t do. I don’t want to make anything worse than it already is, how bad does your wrist feel? Oh and your back? And your ribs? Oh… and your head, how does your head feel lad?”

  Now that the lady mentioned it, his head was throbbing. He didn’t know what She was talking about the ribs. 

“Uh..Er...I-I d-aagh” Thrift groaned again as the pain shot up his back a third time. The woman's eyebrows furrowed in distress and worry. 

“Humph, this won't do. Young men like you should not have to experience such pain. No no not at all… poor lad. Yes yes. Very poor lad.” The woman paced back and forth with her finger on her mouth thinking. After a long pause she took a deep breath. “BREEZE! BREEZE THE LADS WORSE THAN WE THOUGHT WILL YOU PLEASE GET UP HERE!” Thrist jumped at the sudden loud birst, making his back pain all the worse. He winced,  and the woman turned her attention back onto him. “Would you like a glass of water?”

 Thrist Shook his head. All he wanted now was to sleep and forget about all of what had happened...What had happened? How did he get here anyway? Who was Breeze? Who was this woman? All of these questions he wanted to ask. But for some reason he was not able to. At this very moment a much younger woman, probably in her teen years with big round blue eyes, blond flowing hair, a light blue dress on and a concerned expression on her face, burst through the door. 

“Oh! Mamma you didnt tell me he was awake. What do you need?” She tossed a kind yet sad smile  in his direction and he tried to smile back, even though he didn't feel like smiling. Something about this girl made him feel a little better. She must be Breeze… as if reading his mind, the older woman introduced her. 

“Lad this is Breeze, my daughter. Humph… I don't suppose I know your name lad. But there's no time for silly things like that. Breeze, go and get me some of my mixtures. The second ben. I will see what I have there to help the poor boy.” Breeze left the room in a flurry of light blue dress and blond hair, and ofcourse a nod to her mother. Thrists belly did a flip flop. She was so beautiful. Heat rose into his cheeks when he thought like that. I can't get a crush on her...for all I know she could be working for the Man-In-Black. Thrist suddenly grew light headed. He closed his eyes and fell back into unconsciousness.

~*~

This part will be of Breeze. Hope you enjoyed the 2nd chapter in my book.

Hi!!

So! I actually can’t post about Core 3000 today!! 😢 Hopefully tomorrow!!!!
Just wanted to let you know!!

Sup

Its almost the weekend! Its Friday y'all!! I,m absolutely SO done with the week. Its been very busy for some reason and I am sooo tired. I don't usually get much sleep during week days because of stress and school so weekends are my favorite part of the week. And now I'm looking at the clock and its 11:16 already and I have not even started school. *Smiles awkwardly* Oh well though. Today I think I am going to write a little more about Core 3000. Also I need help with coming up with a better name that is more catchy and cool. So I think I will do that later today. Maybe around....uhhhh....lemme think....FOUR!! Ok!! so that's when I will give a update on the story. BYE!!!

-MJ     

PS. Sorry bout the black and white MJ i'm not sure what I was thinking. LOL

Weird thoughts

Hello everyone!!

 I think alot when I am bored....And you know that when people are bored they come up with all sorts of things....SO!  I come up with a few wacky ideas when I am bored. BUT! Before i start let me tell you something about myself. I like to come up with conspiracy theories. I don't believe them its just fun to come up with them. So with that being said, have fun reading some of my weirdest theories and ideas!!!

#1 THE CORONAVIRUS: The Coronavirus is not real, but just a big hokes to clean the planet. The whole world government is in on it. All the people that are "getting sick" are secrete agents working for a corporation like shield or something, helping the government to make it sound even more convincing.

#2 THE GIANT PORTAL UNDER THE STAGE AT SCHOOL: This more of a funny story....When we where practicing at school for a X-mas program for school, at the end we where all supposed  to go and stand on the boxes that where set up to be stages and sign joy to the world. Me and my friend, who shall remain unknown, where standing behind four little preschoolers half our size, and i started to joke about how it was hallow underneath the box and who knows we could fall in at any moment, and then i was like, "WAIT!! DUUUDE!! What if there was a portal under this?! We could fall into a different world." And my friend was like, "DUDE! there are children standing right there!! Shush!! Don't scare them!!" And the little cute five year old boy standing in front of us turned around and said, "WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!" And me and my friend busted up laughing and the boy just stared at us. The little guy was our topic for the rest of the day..which only was like thirty minutes.

#3 NO ONE IS ACTUALLY REAL: This is a original. You and I and everyone else, except one person, are controlled by a GIANT computer. Our brains are smaller computers run by the big computer. We can only access 10% of our brains because of a safety protocol. If you deactivate that you gain full control over yourself. However, you really should not. It can lead to malfunctions and serious damage.

Hope you enjoyed reading those 😂😂😂  I can come out with some more if you liked them
enough!!

-MJ







 

CHAPTER ONE IN CORE 3000

Ok! Sooo I said that I might post the first chapter.... HERE IT IS!!! CHAPTER ONE OF CORE 3000!!! YAY!!!!!! Umm... yeah... I got a little too enthusiastic right there... sorry bout that. I am actually sitting at my desk with a completely blank face... no expression at all... completely blank...oh..huh...my lips are chapped... DONT GET OFF TRACK!!! Anyway! Sorry bout that... I actually do have conversations with my self like that...on group chats... with friends... ANYWAY!! I am not gonna delete anything on this. Your seeing just me, this is me, I am weird... in a weird sorta way...OK!!! HERE IS THE FIRST CHAPTER OF CORE 3000...Sheesh... that took long enough.

DO NOT JUDGE THIS CHAPTER HAS NOT BEEN EDITED IN ANY WAY SHAPE OR FORM!!! 
WARNING: IF YOU DON'T DO GOOD WITH MINOR VIOLENCE YOU SHOULD NOT READ THIS. 

(Someones wrist gets smashed by someone else)

CHAPTER I

Seventeen year old Thrist Le'Grey sat slumped on the porch stairs, thinking about what had happened at meal time earlier in the lunar cycle. His mother had been talking in a hushed voice to his aunt about the war against the Bello fighters(Spawns of the Man-In-Black), “the man in black appeared in one of the shacks,” his mother had said, “our brother was one of them, one of the victims, the man didn’t destroy all of them, only four are dead, the rest are just wounded.”

 Thrist’s aunt had gasped and asked if her brother was among the dead, mother had nodded her head and a tear had trickled down her cheek, falling to the floor making a hissing noise before evaporating. His mother was mad alright. He always knew that when his mother cried hot tears. There must be a ton of small burn marks around the house from her tears. He thought, our wood floors are not the best looking in town, that’s for sure!

“Thrist!” Thrist snapped his head up and looked around. Nobody was there. 

“Thrist, it's Maggie!” Thrist smiled at the cheerful voice of his invisible friend. He had met her last year they had been best friends since. she had arrived on Cor 3000 frome her own planet that had already been over taken an destroyed by the man in black. Now all of her kind were dead or somewhere on different planet or continent. Only her family and her closest relatives were with her.

 “Oh, hi Maggie.” He mumbled, his mind still drifting. 

“What’s the matter long face, you look depressed.” Maggie sat down by Thrist, at least it sounded like she had. 

“Just thinking.” Thrist smiled 

 “Well Thrist, I was thinking we could go on a walk today.  counting to three he reopened them and held his hands out. He felt Maggie set hers on his.

 “Palms up?” He asked.

 “Yup, Gees Thrist, I have been waiting for you to do this since i got here!” Thrist smiled, shut his eyes, pictured Maggie in his mind and reopened his eyes. And there she was, her small form standing there on the grass, she smiled. 

“Can you see me?” She asked, Thrist nodded his head. 

“Remember, you can only be visible for an eighth of this lunar cycle, if we go any lon-” Maggie cut him off, 

“I know, if we go any longer than that you'll faint.” she trilled in her nonchalant way. 

“ I'm guessing you will want to go centaur hunting again, huh.” Thrist laughed when Maggie nodded her head. 

“Yes, Thrist you know I won't give up until I meet one! My mom met one before she died...so I have to too.” Maggie made a fake sad face, making her lip tremble and her eyes droop. Thrist sighed and motioned Maggie to follow him.

Maggies eyes glittered with delight as they began to walk down the path they had followed so many times before. Maggie was convinced that there was a centaur village at the end of the path, but they had never reached it in time because of the time limit that Maggie could stay visible.  

“Maggie,” Thrist began, “What if there is no more centaurs here. And are you sure your mother saw them here? What if she saw them on your home planet.” Maggie's face scrunched up in thought.

“I don't know…” 

Thrift felt a twang of sadness for the small girl, she was only 14, three years younger then Thrift, he couldn’t imagine losing his mother at her age much less, any age. They continued to walk in silence. Thrists mind began to wonder. He thought about his ability, everyone on the planet cor had an ability but Thrist had never met someone with the same ability as his. 

Thrists mother always told him he was special, but he always thought that was because she was his  mother… but as he got older, his power grew with him. This wasn’t normal at all. What if I am special...                                                                                          

~*~

The two suns were low in the sky and Thrift knew it was the end of the time that Maggie could be visible. 

“Maggie, I think it’s time we go back.” Thrift furrowed his brows and squinted up. “C’mon.” He turned and started jogging down the path. 

“Wait! Thrift I-” Maggie wilted, crumpling to the ground. 

“ Oh!” Thrift gasped and nelt beside his friends small form. He reached for her to turn her over, she had fallen with her face towards the ground, as he did this she grabbed his wrist, standing up as she did so. 

“O-ouch, Maggie that hurts.” Thrist twisted his face in pain as Maggie’s grip tightened. 

“So?” Maggie smirked. “Thrist, you fall for things so easily. I thought you would be tougher to fool, with all your powers I never would have fallen for a trick like this. How dumb can you be?” Maggie’s voice suddenly changed to a older voice, more cunning, More teen like, more attractive. Her eyes flashed with amusement, as if she were enjoying this. 

“P-powers? I-I don’t understand...what are you doing? I thought you were, you were… Maggie. N-not whatever… this is. What’s wrong with you?” At this point Thrist was really confused. He didn’t understand what she meant by powers or for that matter what she wanted from him. Suddenly, his stomach flipped and his brain felt foggy. “Very funny Maggie. But we really do need to get moving. I’m getting light headed and you know what that means.” He added a warning tone to his voice, this act was getting annoying 

“Yes I know exactly what that means. Why are you questioning me? You think this is a game? Don't you see Thrist I, I work for the man in black.” Maggie said this through clenched teeth. “Oh and by the way you feeling like you are, that’s a good sign...for me, I have been stalling, just waiting for you to get weaker, because I knew that otherwise you would be to strong for me to fight, if it came fo that, but now I have the complete advantage. Now stop fighting the urge to pass out and give in to it. Or will I have to make you do it.” Her eyes looked to be on fire. Thrist stared into those fiery eyes and thought of how they used to be calm and curious. Maggie has played a very good part. 

“You can’t make me do this Maggie, I don’t know what your talking about and I don’t want to. Let me go and I will forget about all of this. Ple-” Thrist let out a cry of pain as Maggie’s grip on his wrist tightened further, he reeled back the pain to much for him to handle. There was a crunch as Maggie twisted his wrist. 

“I’m sorry Thrist, I liked you… I really did,  but what has to be done has to be done. I hope that whatever happens to you isn’t too painful.” Finally it was to much for Thrist to take and he collapsed, too weak to stand. Maggie caught him and lowered him to the ground. The soft grass cradling him, he finally let the darkness overcome him.

   

Other stories I’m working on

Hello!
Currently I am working on two novels of my own. The first one is The Last Hope in the hopes and dreams saga. The second one was originally going to be a novel that all of my sisters and I where going to write together but they kinda forgot about it. I don’t actually have a permanent name for this one yet but for now I’m calling it Core 3000.

I’m also working on two books with two of my very good friends. One is called What If I Die and the other one is called Lost in the Woods.

Today I think I will focus on Core 3000. This book is the one I have the most motivation and ideas for at the moment. It’s about a 17 year old boy named Thrist Le’Gray. He lives on a totally different planet and for that matter, universe. In the beginning of the book Thrist is sitting on his porch steps and thinking about something that had happened to his uncle. This is the first time you ate introduced to the Man-In-Black. He is a evil force that usually appears in a black cloak, thus the name. He is not actually a man, but a form of energy held together by a magnetic force, like all off the planets. (which I will talk about later.) Thrist’s thoughts are interrupted by his friend Maggie, who is invisible, and they end up going on a walk together. Something that I should have mentioned earlier is that Thrist has powers. He has the power of dimension and also can read minds. He isn’t fully aware of his real power yet so he will have to discover as the book goes on. Anyway, since Thrift has the power of dimension, he can change Maggie from her invisible self into someone he can see. And FYI she is not imaginary... just so you know. But because he is not fully aware of everything that he can do, Maggie can only stay visible for about an hour our time or Thrist will faint. When it comes time for Maggie to turn back to her invisible self, she fakes being ill and tricks Thrist into her staying visible until he faints. during this time Maggie tells Thrist some untold truths about her life. She ends up being a spawn of the Man-In-Black and shes trying to get Thrist for his powers. this is when Thrist learns that he has more power than he thinks. He tries to stay awake for as long as possible but ends up giving in to passing out in the end of chapter one. Some things that I don't tell the readers until later, is that during the time that Thrist is unconscious, something scares off Maggie before she can bring him to the Man-In-Black, probably saving his life. Sooo... it is a pretty intense first chapter if you read it and I definitely would say that this book will be for older kids. I might post the actual chapter sometime...No promises though!!!

-MJ   

Hia!!

Hello! Sorry i have not posted in a very long time! I have been very busy with school and other things like that. I'm going to post something tomorrow to make up for today! im only going to be posting on Sundays or Mondays from now on sooo yeah... Thanks for understanding!!!

-MJ

Hi!!
Soooo... I was going to make a post today but didn’t get to it... I have lost my notes for today’s post, and, school has been really rough. So hopefully by Sunday I will have something 😖
MJ🤪